Tzvetan Todorov theory

Tzvetan Todorov is a theorist who came up with the conventions of narrative scenes and decided that there five stages:

We could link this to our music video as we have a narrative where a girl is being bullied, this could show his theory for example:
1 - Equilibrium - all of the girls are happy and friends
2 - Disruption (equilibrium begins) - girls start to fall out
3 - Recognition of disequilibrium - girls realize they have all fallen out
4 - Repair disequilibrium - start to make up and be friends
5 - Equilibrium repaired - all friends again

Facebook feedback

 We have posted a video of our initial screening on our Facebook fan page to recieve some feedback and to see what our fans and target audience like and dislike about our music video so and to see what we can improve.

Comparing shot types with my initial screening video