Initial screening feedback

Our music video was shown to our whole class to try and get some feedback on what we have completed so far and how we can improve it.
Positives:

• Green screen - creative
• Well planned narrative 
• Good pace of shots
• All shots are in sync
• Shots matched the beat

Negatives: 

• Not enough narrative shots compared to performance
• Lighting on narrative shots
• Too many lip shots

From this feedback we can now work on the factors which our audience suggested, such as taking out the lips shots which do not look as good and cut the amount down and add more narrative shots. This has been very helpful to us as we can now improve our music video.